Feedback

I asked two of my classmates as well as one of my friends outside of class to provide me with feedback in order to make some improvements before my project was complete. They all thought that it was well done and they were all excited to see the final product. However I noticed that they all gave me the same suggestion and that was to use more examples other than just Demi Lovato. One of my peers suggested to use a personal example as well. Automatically I thought that that was an excellent idea and I knew exactly what I was going to do. I decided to speak to my class about a friend of mine who had dealt with basically everything that I was going to discuss in my project. I knew that this would not only make it more interesting but it would also prove to the class that everything I was going to say does occur and that it was not just random facts that I found on the internet. I was very pleased with the feedback that I received and I know that it definitely allowed me to have a more powerful presentation.